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Tuesday, June 24, 2025

from JTPYO – King of the Waste [3] / the trap (excerpt from "Cuetio")

10 October 2024 / 24 June 2025 

JTPYO – King of the Waste [3] / the trap (excerpt: "Cuetio")  

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(from King of the Waste)

Our Story Thus Far: Cuetio is a character from King of the Waste [3] / the trap – he has already appeared as the MC in "the children's gifts" which is in the last part of "the trap." He's a boy age 14, a minor among the Children of God; the tribe has taken refuge in Onyx Hold when their way to an oasis is found to be blocked by hostile raiders. 

Naxosos (sovereign of the Children of God) has via sorcery effected the release of the tribe's fighting force and, just a couple of hours into the morning (about two AM). 

The Children of God, with the assistance of the sorcerer Joliel and a couple of the newly-released warriors, are now on their way to the oasis, their original destination, Kahechi Latho. 

The narrative is from the point of view of the youth Cuetio. He is with his father and their three animals (a cow and two goats), as well as his sister and his elderly auntie as they leave Onyx Hold in the early morning hours. 


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Around us people filled waterskins: Two of the Six each held up a large skin from which the Children of God took water. 

All rejoiced and expressed blessings at the sight of our giants, who smiled and responded "We are glad. We are glad." (One will never hear these men say "praise God" – they are unbelievers, though as I have said they are righteous and responsible, generally, in their actions.) 

Two of six war-horses stood with their heads down at ease on the flat place, swishing their tails and munching their feedbags, their tack spread out on the unnaturally firm surface, while the warriors poured. It was a heartening sight. Everything smelled of sweat and stress, but there was no suggestion of injury or blood. 

Without a doubt, the tale of their rescue would be interesting. 

The cattle were well along the march by the time we emerged and had begun; indeed, the bulls and priests were already to the bottom of the great dune and starting to swing to the north and the cows were almost down. It was mostly quiet but we could hear the drivers calling out every so often and the beasts' anxious lowing as they slipped and slid, and were hampered by the sand. 

No additional instructions had been given as far as I knew, but it seemed that observing silence was of somewhat less importance now. That was reassuring. Even then, no one undertook to explain anything. 

The Goddess herself was not seen, nor was the Second, nor the archmage, nor the four other warriors. Naxosos King was nowhere around – his friends were absent, and the others who had gone with them, the two priests. 

We had exited the Hold almost at the top on the great dune's southwest side and our route curved down through sliding sand, southwest and then north, skirting the area of small dunes we had been required to navigate going up. It was a quick walk, but more exposed and footing was troublesome – once our waterskins had been filled, Father growled at Aghib and Fiyani, "You two! Go! Go!" and the two women had gone, stumbling and sliding, holding hands, along the faint way that traced the lee of a ridge then zigzagged down the dune-side. The goats went, too – Esseh and Shi are unerring at keeping to the trail and setting a pace. 

The risk for a terrible tumble was by appearance much less than it had been the other day, going up – however, the sand here was unstable and deep. 

Father waited until almost everyone else had gone. The two warriors were readying their horses when he asked the few stragglers if they would like to go ahead and then, satisfied that no one was being abandoned, he and I, and Gamti dragging the travois of all our possessions (including bulging waterskins), prepared to make our way down. 

Our God is wondrous and mighty, and brings us easily and safely out of unimaginable peril time and time again. 

Immediately we saw the travois was going to bog in the sliding sand, and it was heavy enough that it might even cause the cow to lose her footing, so Father and I would have to do some lugging to help Gamti. This was expected. 

We began our trail. So glad was I to be out of the terrifying blackness of Onyx Hold that my steps were probably hurried – Okocas then spoke and said "Wait, boy! Turn and look!" and so I did and what I saw transfixed me. 

To the west, all along the peaks of the Alethim-eya, from far southwards to almost even with where we were, storm-clouds bumbled with their insides glinting and flashing. It was not so far away that we were unable to hear the thunder. 

"How can that be?" I wondered. I was not the only one exclaiming over it now. 

"The priests," someone said and someone else said "The Goddess," and Father said, "Our King is also capable of feats that are beyond most men – it's the Prophecy fulfilled," and then someone said in a booming voice – it was one of the two warriors – "Our Naxosos King accomplished a great working this day and it will be great in the telling!" 

It's likely I would have remained there staring for minutes, but Father again shook my shoulder and said, "Let us not get too far behind!" and so we each lifted a limb of the travois and without urging Gamti started down the trail, which was very clear to follow now, and we started down the side of the great dune, and I started praying. 

By the time we reached the dune's foot, the flickering of the storm in the west had ceased and a smudge of light had begun to show in the east. "We have two hours to cover a little more than six miles," Father said. Again he checked behind us – the two warriors, on their horses, were in the van, so he had little to worry about as far as people straying or getting lost: Still he acted as though the safety of all the people was his sole responsibility. 

Gamti went eagerly, all but swift-footedly: No one ever has to explain to her or her sisters in the herd what the sun's rising on a march might cost. I walked at her head, between her eyes and the oncoming light, to shade her (having to trot in a few places, as she keeps a very good pace). As the ground flattened out and became firmer it was not as necessary for Father and I to assist with the travois and so we made decent time, with Father keeping us going, all the while making sure never to lose sight of those behind us. 

I didn't see my aunt or my sister at any point – that was reassuring. They were making good time, too. 

Even before the sun was halfway up its heat was a sword. "We really have to move, now," Father would say every so often, as though we were not already toiling to the extent of our capabilities. As is his way, Okocas seemed to increase in strength and alertness as we traveled: On stretches where the going was easy enough that Gamti could pull the travois herself, he would range up and down the line, offering to help anyone who seemed to lag. (Sometimes I wonder if this doesn't irritate people who are trying to fall behind so they can sleep, chase game, or be intimate – but then remind myself that all these are forbidden on a march, anyway.) 

I know Kahechi Latho and the signs that we are drawing near. It is not unheard-of to travelers along the range, but generally passed by, as there is a larger and more reliable source of water, Waram H'thel, within another few miles. The latho, I have been told, used to be extensive with two wells and a number of structures along it. These had all been abandoned, now sunken beneath the sand, and the latho identifiable by a pool that rises and recedes at random intervals. At its greatest twenty cattle can drink to repletion, after which it takes hours for the water to come back to where it was before – most of the time it is a wallow that animals and humans can dig to find a trickle, and perhaps every other year there will be no water at all except that the Redoubt can bring forth. (He has done this that I have seen a couple of times and by report many dozens of times. His ability is profound.) 

An hour and a half up, the sun blared at our backs across the eastern Waste of Murmayi, so named on the map, as we drew within shouting distance of the latho. Here one can look back and see the great dune like the shrugging shoulder of a titan to the south and west. 

Fiyani and Aghib were there already and greeted us enthusiastically, and showed us to the spot where we were to pitch. (Aghib is sixty but she is still very game on the march and, no matter how tired she is, she will always be there at the end to offer a hand in pitching, water, and cheering words.) There were already tents and awnings sprouting around the pool that was thankfully quite broad this day: In fact, there was more water in that place than I have ever seen or heard about. It was also muddy. 

The muddiness made no difference at this time, however: To my eye and the eyes of a hundred beasts and a hundred or so people, Kahechi Latho was as lovely as any tree-shaded, flower-decked upland pond. 



(end of excerpt) 24 June 2025 


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Sunday, May 18, 2025

outline/names of parts JTPYO - FYI

This is all the parts/outline of JTPYO (outline as of 2017) and the parts I have written out and published in this blog and nowhere else:


JTPYO books and chapters:

king of the waste

    transgression (whole thing)

    contest (whole thing)

    the trap (currently being edited 05 18 2025)

    the blow (whole thing still to be edited)

    demonstration (see above)

king of the fishers

    the one awaited (whole thing still to be edited)

    dream (whole thing still to be edited)

    the dogs (partial including a lyric)

    the avatar of sorah-nen (fragment only)

    the wild bees (only mentioned in outline)

king of the heights

    the adulterous ones (mentioned in outline - the basic story of this is in "it isn't him" by the way)

    the slip (mentioned in outline; also mentioned in published excerpt "it isn't him")

    wedding (only mentioned in outline; see above)

    letters (fragment only; see above)

    the stones themselves (only mentioned in outline; mentioned in "it isn't him")

king of the land of the dead

    a bitter draught (still being written; a large part is published)

    the living dead (partial)

    a devil's work (substantial parts; last excerpt published is "it isn't him")

    the poison tree (some parts; last excerpt published is "Conetheg-i-i'el")

    the jinn (only mentioned in outline)



from JTPYO - King of the Waste [3] / the trap (excerpt: the dragon's egg - Cuetio)

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(This is from "kotw the trap" - the episode is called "the dragon's egg/Cuetio" - Cuetio is a youth who has lived to observe the Children of God being rescued by the grace of the Almighty from the trap called Onyx Hold.)


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Father Ivask continued: "The King cannot return to Viragos after the Temple there tried to arrest him. That is how he came to be injured. And part of the reason there's a price on his head." After some hushed exclamations, he said, "Incidentally, as I'm sure some of you know, Naemas Tagros Long-Legs is our King's friend for ten years now, and one of our new priests who accompanied the King upon this mission is Naemas's brother Naimejo. The Tagros Naimejo's fame as an evangelist is known far and wide, just as Naemas's – is this not so, Children of God?"

There were outcries at this. Rather clandestinely, I glanced around trying to see the King's mother, but I didn't see her. most of the women had their heads covered, so it was hard to tell who was who.

She is older than Father by a year or two, but the Lady Ember seems a great deal younger – she is small and lithe, her eyes bright and her face full of freckles. It is not just her coloring, but her stance, sparkling voice, and fiery manner that make her seem the same age as my sister, who is not yet twenty.

And can she dance! The Lady Ember is new to the assembly, but has been so quick to learn our ways that often she stays near the head of the line until the sun begins to rise. This is not an exaggeration.

(We kids are not supposed to watch or take part in the dance so I try mostly to keep these ideas out of my mind, especially at lessons.)

Father Ivask went on: "We are all familiar with the legend of the soratrap and also we know there are many who believe Naxosos King to be that individual, who is the culmination of many legends. There is a general belief that the true king has returned; over the last forty years or so – two generations – countless rumors have propagated as to his birth, settlement of origin, and location. The official account is that this one died as a newborn, but almost no one believes it."

A murmur of agreement went up at this. After a moment, Father Ivask continued.

"That our King is so hunted and for so little cause is one factor suggesting he, our Lord the Gorardeno's Naxosos is the returned ruler of Arigne and the People of God. And what he accomplished at the South Water yesterday is evidence." Here the priest paused for a moment to allow the whispers to die away.

Now a woman wailed "God is good!" then started crying. Without a doubt, it was the King's mother. A few women gathered about another in a dark-blue headscarf as though to offer comfort.

Our God is is always and in every way good.

"However," Father Ivask continued, "it may also be that he is simply a sorcerer of great power, born to an influential family. A few such exist in our part of the world at present." Before the assembly could begin to complain, he said further, "Two of these, for example, are our holy priests the Tagros Naimejo, who as I said is Long-Legs' brother older by about ten years, and Maynaliel who is nicknamed Tolalo – you know him – they assisted the warriors' escape by calling a storm. We all saw this upon our exit from Onyx Hold. Members of the tribe may not know these two, but we priests surely recognize them as mighty in magic. Also, they are powerful evangelists. The fisher-folk know them well."

I reflected that this was probably why we were looking at water in the Kahechi Latho today.

Father Ivask said, "Know that our King is safe. He underwent an ordeal that demonstrated him to be accomplished in magic, as well as a man of sagacity and cunning. The Goddess states she had little to do except to make sure that the rescue party found the location and then escaped. They – Fathers Naimejo and Tolalo, the Goddess and her Second, Naxosos King, and our scouts Zarosis's son Korsis and Tagros Naemas Long-Legs – are all safe. The warriors Stanilomaxinon and Terenorint are hale.

"After they rid this latho of our enemies, the two of them returned to attend the King. Tagros Naemas ran all night transporting the King, who was unconscious, to safety: From that place, he then brought the four donkeys here to Kahechi Latho, and returned across the sand in the morning heat."

"They're at Onyx Spires, aren't they?" someone yelled and a number of others could be heard shushing him.

Father Ivask said. "We will not talk about their current location." Then, after a brief pause: "The archmage is whole and killed some of our enemies." (At this, someone spat and a grumble arose, though it abated quickly.) Then, laughing, the ancient priest said, "Nay, we should thank that one, for he also worked his utmost to deliver the Children of God."

"We'd be sitting back in Onyx Hold watching the herd die!" a man called and this was followed by someone else saying "And he would be the one to thank for that!" and then another fellow who sounded like one of the cattle-drovers said "We could have got out and the animals, but we would leave a trail of bodies!" and someone else said "Who would have fought the Jaras for water at Kahechi Latho?"


(end of excerpt 18 May 2024) 


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Monday, March 18, 2024

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Sunday, February 16, 2020

I deleted all my posts because most of them are really old

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